Title: Criminal Activity
Scene 1: The crime
Tim: “We can’t do this, it’s too dangerous. You want me to climb up a bank, lock pick the window, get as much money as I can and then jump down. Plus we’ll probably go to prison for at least 30 years if we get caught.”
Samuel: “We’re not going to get caught because it’s 1 o’clock in the morning and no one can see us. Remember you get 50% of the money you steal, (pausing) so it’s worth it. Are you up for it?”
Tim: “Alright fine, but I want the money as soon as I get down…OK.”
Samuel: “Yes master. (laughing under his breath) Wait, before you go take this walkie talkie.”
(Tim takes the walkie talkie then climbs up the building)
Tim: “There’s so much money here (whispering).“
Samuel: “Na you don’t say, it’s a bank! (talking to himself)“
(Tim gets his bag and starts raiding through all the safes rummaging for money. He then climbs back through the window)
Samuel: “Alright Tim. Throw it down then jump.”
Tim: “Are you mad? I’m taking this for myself, nothing for you!”
(Tim jumps down and lands in a bin, he jumps out and starts running. Samuel pulls out a gun and starts chasing after him)
Samuel: “I SWEAR I’M GOING TO KILL YOU WHEN I CATCH YOU!”
Samuel:”COME HERE!”
(Woman walking, sees Tim running and Samuel chasing him with a gun. She calls 999)
Woman: “There’s a man chasing another man with a gun!”
Police Officer 1:”Where are you mam?”
Woman:”I am in Union Avenue, SE1, Elephant and Castle.”
Police Officer 1: “I’ll be there right away.”
Women: “Thank you sir.”
(5 minutes later 5 police officers turn up)
Police Officer 1: “We are going to tape down this area to make sure they don’t escape, I’m also going to send 4 police officers to search the area.”
Police Officer 2: (as he runs he sees Samuel running holding the gun) “Hey you come here!”
Samuel:”Oh no”
(Police Officers 2 and 3 chase Samuel whilst Police Officers 4 and 5 chase Tim)
Police Officer 3:”We got them sir”(holding Samuel in cuffs whilst Police officer 4 holds Tim)
Scene 2: The court
Judge: “Order, everyone sit down please!”(banging his hammer)
(Everybody sits down and stops talking)
Judge: “Today we have Samuel Ruins versus Timothy Curlew. Are both cases ready?”
Tim: “Ready sir.”
Samuel: “Ready sir.”
Judge: “Do you swear to tell the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth?”
Samuel: “Yes sir.”
Tim: “Yes sir.”
Judge: “So according to Timothy Curlew, you Samuel Ruins threatened him into robbing a bank and after chased him with a gun. Is that correct sir?”
Samuel: “That is not true!”
Judge: “Is there anything you would like to say at this point in time Timothy?”
Timothy: “Yes, that is a complete lie. He was threatening me with a gun which is why when the police caught him he was armed with a gun!”
Samuel:”That is not true!”
Judge:”Okay! Please stop arguing”(banging her hammer)
Judge:”So let me get something straight, who is the criminal here?”
(Samuel and Tim pointed at each other)
Judge:”It says here that you, Samuel Ruins were seen chasing Timothy with a glock 17 and then after swore at a police man when he attempted to disarm you”
Samuel:”Are you mad! You really believe all that rubbish”(waving around his arms)
Judge:”Don’t talk to me like that!”
Timothy:”Um I believe that what you are saying is t…”
Samuel:”Shut up and stop trying to make it seem like I am th… “
Judge:”Please stop talking without my permission”(banging her hammer twice now)
Security Guard:”Excuse me sir there is someone wanting to get in”
Judge:”Let him in…”

May 28, 2015 at 10:38 pm
I am working on the script writing badge but I wanted to know what badges I have actually achieved because on my achieved badges page it says I only have two badges.
Thank you, Joshua
June 3, 2015 at 8:08 am
Hello Josh,
I have updated your profile – you now have six badges. You should aim t achieve the Discovery badge by going back and re-drafting any work on reading – Look at The Tempest and Graveyard Book.
I like the setting of this script, but I think some of the events happen too quickly – there is no real build up to the parents strangling the boy. Where does the police officer come from.
Additionally, re-read and edit for typos.
See me if you would like some help,
Mr North
June 24, 2015 at 6:16 pm
Sir I am finished on my script writing badge, I hope you like it!